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| Pandaemonic Paradigm 2006-08-06 ch 1,  | abuseIt's good, but the corniness makes me cringe a little bit. |
| Au Printemps 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Short and very powerful. And so true. |
| Wasted Postage 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuse*ponders* Hm... this is a very thought provoking piece. You did an excellent job with it. Great work! ~*~AbunaiChikara |
| Summerdazed 2004-01-05 ch 1, | abusecool... =summerdazed= |
| Seras Nova 2003-11-01 ch 1, | abuseClever. That's about all I can muster without babbling how good this was. Excellent work. Keep writing. -Seras |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is nice, although I swear I've heard it somewhere before...hmm...oh, right, old proverb, I get it. Never mind. ~lyv |
| greenzzz 2003-06-04 ch 1, | abusei'm atheist...but still liked it...made me feel better and made me smile...thanks...*smiles* greenz |
| Da Muffin man 2003-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy my, you have your own veritable little christian fan circle here at fp.net, dont you? Of course, those things almost always end up being "Good Christians vs. THe DEVIL!" type things. (I read HEart of the Swords's bio. Can you tell? It made me laugh.) Well, you've taken an old saying and tried-unsuccessfully, (in my opinion) to put it in poem form. *shrugs* What more can I say? If nothing else, it reminds us that not everything is doom and gloom right now. |
| Nightsovereign 2003-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThis proverb holds an unbelievable amount of power in three lines. It says so much about faith and the power of just believing in God. This is such a good example of simplicity at its finest. |
| Catella Erato 2003-04-04 ch 1, | abuseShort but powerful. Great work! ~ Little Dog Muse |
| midary 2003-04-03 ch 1, | abuseits amazing how powerful 3 lines can be ^_^ |
| Needa S 2003-02-28 ch 1, | abuseExcellent!! Do keep writing. |
| Keep it 100 2003-02-25 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. This is going on my favorite's list. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Incrys 2003-02-03 ch 1, | abuseAs I read through your material, I wonder why I didn't review it before..I love your style of writing, it is extremely insightful. Please keep writing =) |
| Andromeda 2002-08-17 ch 1, | abuseI really love haikus. They're so simple, yet convey so many meanings. The way I'm interpreting it (and I don't know if this is what you intended), if you have faith then you can drive away any fear that might linger around you. Wonderful job! |