 Linnda 2002-04-14 . chapter 1haha, yeap, let's find you one... *scratch her head* I really don't know wich are your type so
sorry I can't help you with that, but I lift your self-esteem
hehe, that was so cute!! I loved it!! I really like your poetry work
there, good luck, hope you find your own huggable boyfriend!! |
 Toireasa 2002-04-14 . chapter 1I think they belong where they are. It adds to the forelorness of the poem, the angstiness of it. Anyways, you rhyme in a most fantastic way, it's not bad in the least, but very well done and really quite powerful.. Nice job, and I know several people who would agree with you. "See? I don't need counseling. All I need is a boyfriend" Sounds familiar. lol Anyways, I like this, and you have nice rhyming patterns. Nice work.
--Toireasa |