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Dryad 2002-04-21 . chapter 1
i don't think ne one needs coundseling ^_^ hehehe this was really good
Linnda 2002-04-14 . chapter 1
haha, yeap, let's find you one... *scratch her head* I really don't know wich are your type so

sorry I can't help you with that, but I lift your self-esteem

hehe, that was so cute!! I loved it!! I really like your poetry work

there, good luck, hope you find your own huggable boyfriend!!
Toireasa 2002-04-14 . chapter 1
I think they belong where they are. It adds to the forelorness of the poem, the angstiness of it. Anyways, you rhyme in a most fantastic way, it's not bad in the least, but very well done and really quite powerful.. Nice job, and I know several people who would agree with you. "See? I don't need counseling. All I need is a boyfriend" Sounds familiar. lol Anyways, I like this, and you have nice rhyming patterns. Nice work.
--Toireasa
Kayellelle 2002-04-13 . chapter 1
wow that was deep thatere for every one who says that nocternality doesn't help inspiration pffffffff.
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