That is a really good poem..

Aw...this is so cute! It's short, but it gets the message across. Wonderful job!!~Sahara~

Cute poem. Some of the ryhme is a little strange, doesn't seem like ballet, but it's more of a cutsie poem. Good Job.
~~*Emmy*~~

Cool! Fun little poem!
peace/love

I really love this poem. I especially like the part about freedom, about dancing free. You may say you don't have any idea where these themes come from, but the feeling and meaning in them is amazing. They really tell a story in their own way, and though it may not relate to you directly, I think that the ideas are ones that apply to everyone at somepoint in their life. .. on a happier note... UR MY BEST FRIEND, PLEASE KEEP WRITING UR SUTEKI POEMS!!! ~.^