sorry, but some of the lines seem too long or too short. i like the rhymes, but sometimes it makes the poem sound awkward. anyways, i really do like this. it reminds me of a guy i kno. truth is, i notice his depression, but he never tells me anything.

Too true... unfortunatly- me and many others can relate 110% to this. If you remember the stuff you wondefully have written like this you won't lose the real you. EEk...some poems i can relate with way too much. I LOVE this- good work!

Wow... I can't tell you how many times I have felt exactly like this.

My sister disappeared in Germany over a year ago and her disappearance is the centre of a major murder enquiry (after much campaiging on our behalf) The whole experience itself has been very isolating as no one really appreciates or understands what it is to have a missing loved one. Plus the stuff it led me to... depression, cutting, etc just led to even more isolation.

Anyway enough about me... just wanted to say its a really good poem

Ever

My gods. My gods my gods my gods. Not only is this good, but I can relate to it. I know how it feels to be like that...

and I would love to be able to write poetry like this.

again very nice work, and something i know quite a lot about. those people screwed me up. but then i found Natty, and i really stopped caring about them. oh... by the way i have a few funny stories about her. anyway that doesn't matter. keep up the good work- now doesn't that sound corney. bye.

I.M./G_O_D.

I can so relate to this poem... I think you capture feelings that many of us can identify with... powerfully done! )

isn't it funny how the minority that form the majority of jackasses do this to people everyday-nice poem- very nice with a truth. This has a free verse feeling to it, but it works nicely with the rhymes too- the lines are a little eratic in syllable length though, which makes them a little awkward.

TO

huh *GASP* that is SOOOOO WONDERFUL! I know that feeling when people dont notice your deepressed, or even if they do notice, but dont try to help you...Wow, very powerful. I love the second line mostly. This is going in my fav. stories list!

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Excellent poem. I can relate, really. You have a lot of talent.

Paging Dr. Goodauthor!

Oh, wait, thats you!

Jackie Boy

Very heartfelt. Describes you perfectly.

This is 's so true;what everyone goes ,atleast I poem definitely makes you the next entry on my favourite authors writing;you're real good at it.