Awww...^)^ That was wondeful. I like the way it began and ended. It was very absorbing.

Intense emotions - I love it.

excellent, miss CC. i can almost picture it in your writing- coolness. :) This is excellent. makes me wonder, all of my friends are amazing writers... hmmm... scary...

I'm too lazy to sign in, anyway...
hey stinky, since when have you been writing stuff? and since when has it been so good? So hats off to you, assuming that you are wearing a hat, otherwise pants off to you. I can't believe the things that you picture in your mind. We have to get better at lying.
THE END

I'm too lazy to sign in, anyway...
hey stinky, since when have you been writing stuff? and since when has it been so good? So hats off to you, assuming that you are wearing a hat, otherwise pants off to you. I can't believe the things that you picture in your mind. We have to get better at lying.
THE END

Weird but really kewl! I like it! Any inspiration? Seemed based on a personal experience! Like it alot!