wow..that was so good yet so depressing. stupid girl..*sigh

aww - that was sad...but good - and its sad that you know that this is actually happening - well done, you're an all right writer =) ~Damia~

hey shirlz chiuee gets 2 koalas? not fair...;-P hehehe
very good story chiuee! it seems real, almost...a message to everyone out there...don't do drugs...very bad very bad...(i'm babbling)

OMG! Dat was SOOOOOO good! hehe i actually thought it was going to be about a dance competition!! You surprised me! lol but either way i enjoyed da story so continue writin!! great job-o!! i tihnk u just earned urself 2 koalas!!