well, gluck!

Hi, i noticed that all of the chapters have the exact same content, and i just wanted t osay that it would be much more convenient if u simply put it up ONCE and delete the rest of the chapters. You can add them in again with the actual chapter's content when your finished editing.

Good luck getting Published!

if your not going to post any more take the goddamn story down. Its annoying as **.

sigh. i thought this would happen. oh well, u guys r totally right. its ur story to do with it wat u want. if it got published i would totally buy it, but its so bloody difficult to do! and im guessing u guys r in america or something, so it would be a bloody load of money to ship it. oh well. gud luck with it. i hope u do get it published, it would be great for u guys. WAH sniff*

may I ask why you have the same message asking after a beta 19 times?? Why not just once?

P.S.: this is frustrating as the summary sounds really good but you haven't got any chapters up so I can't read the story!!

Um yah. I really wanted to read this...So why are all the chapters the notice?

Please at least put the story up...

Um...why are all the chapters gone? I really wanted to read this and ch 18 is showing up as all the chapters. Was this intentional?

Aww..why did you replace all your chapters with the author's notice note? I just started reading this last night, and only got to the 5th chapter. It's a really good chapter, I was so looking forward to reading the next few chapters. Anyways, I can't help you since I'm not what you're looking for, but I hope you find someone quickly to help you with your work. Good luck.

So when I first read the summary of this I was kind of off-put, but then when I found it on so many people's favorites I decided to give it a try. And I am so glad I did because this is utterly fantastic.

I love the whole intertwining of hate and love in this fic. For both Christian and Caleb. How he embraces hate towards Christian but when it came to Caleb, even when he is a complete **, he still holds onto his love and obsession with him. I can definitely see him being stubborn in giving up their friendship, especially after being in love with him for so long.

Christian I adore in this story - ever since he was first introduced. But I definitely relate to Drake. Awhile ago I fell in love with my best friend and even after she began to act like a jerk, I still hung around. It wasn't until someone else showed me the light that I stopped letting her walk all over me.

And, God, I relate to always being in the middle of two people fighting...

But, yes, this story is fabulous. So much so that I stayed awake all the way past sunrise to finish it.

The only concrit I have is that maybe there should be a couple cool down chapters, only so that when the big, intense things happen there can be proper build up. Like with Christian and Drake, there were only a few lines of calmness and sweetness and friendship and everything else was just insanity and anger. I like the idea of them being friends. Throughout the story I always wanted him to go to Christian to talk to about his confusing emotions over Caleb, cuz Christian seems the sort to understand and not judge.

OK, in short, I LOVE this story and am greatly anticipating the next few chapters. I really hope you're able to get this published - I sure would buy it!

This is an amazing story and the characters are wonderful. I'm really hoping to see a Christian/Drake ending though, because I think they're perfectly imperfect for each other.

I think I actually find the Drake/Christian relationship to be more appealing. They have so much chemistry going on, it's unbelievable. That's not to say that I really mind Drake/Caleb, it just seems as if Drake worships Caleb a bit too much for the relationship to be real. And the whole possessive Caleb scene? It doesn't go over well with me. Suffice to say, Caleb simply isn't a favorite of mine. I mean, I always find myself wondering about his feeling for Drake. It bothers me; it really does.

I'm not a college student, and English isn't even my first language, but we get along well. I'm probably not what you're looking for, and I have no idea if you've already found someone, but I've helped a few writers (or friends, kinda melds together after a while) to edit, encourage, help and mull over whatever needed along with characters, plot and all of that mumbo jumbo, but you've scared me off with some big talk. If you need help, I have no problem offering it, and when you go all 'is that supposed to be help' I won't be offended nor take it to heart, to each his own.

And I definitely don't recommend my stories.

All in all, I'm yours if you're desperate (

However, I'm sure you'll find what you're looking for.

Now for the actual review.
...Well, I am swept off my feet. Completely delighted. I enjoyed reading the story immensely, and I sure as hell hope it gets finished sometime relatively soon.
I harbor a slight dislike towards Caleb, but I guess it's simply the 'main character syndrome' - as I got quite attached to Drake and see he needs to let go of the insecure best friend for a while.
Christian was my definite favorite, and I hope everything turns out alright for him.
I enjoyed all the little jokes, and actually grabbed my head and stopped reading (while covering my eyes) on the 'dare' part.
Really anxiety-evoking, actually.
Almost made me hyperventilate. Always a good thing, naturally XD

Either way, I'm lovin' it.

Enjoy da life~

Hmm, Hmm. Story's got potential. But, it needs some serious work. For starters, it's a bit melodramatic. I mean, one thing happens, then another bad thing happens, then another, there's no break. There's no "comedic relief". And time goes by way too fast. We should see some bonding between Christian and Drake. The characters also need to be a little more rounded, they're still very one-dimensonal.
You're just pacing way too fast, and need to slow down, to think of the characters and how to make the story flow well. We didn't see a single thing happened in camp. It started, then was done. So, while there's a potentially publishable story here, it needs to be edited quite a bit.
And I hope you don't take any of that the wrong way, I'm merely trying to help.
Faith

wow this is amazing. I really hope this gets published because it is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. It made me laugh, cry, actually want to kill some of the charactors at some points. Well it was just that good. I am not sure how the beta-ing thing works but if you want to pm or something maybe I can do it. Anything to help.