|Reviews for Evil's reign|
| aurias 1/21/03 . chapter 1
I see couplets. So I guess this is the beginning of "coupleting" for all your later poems!
Rhythm is rather good, reading is quite smooth though awkward at some places, but the last four lines seem to be quite an abrupt stop. Good try.
| Robs 5/19/02 . chapter 1
You tried too hard to rhyme in some of it. Some parts were very clear in rhythm and the rhyming didn't interrupt the piece, but in other places there was a word that threw it off or a point where the reader was bored by the constant repeat of the ending of words. I liked it overall, but some parts could really do with a little revision.