Whoa! Child-Dragon, that was great. I really was amazed, as always. You're a really great writer. Check out some of my stuff, both here and on .

you're very strong in this peice, and the ideas come out clear. rather dark.

Wow! That's some powerful writing... very powerful. It was in a disturbing but towards the end it really was a thought to think about... this is the first of yours that I've read but wow, it's amazing to hear it from a point of view of evil, complete evil... but towards the end... gosh... it's truely something to think about... WOW...