Great poem, I was kinda confused at the beginning but got it later. I liked the lily analogy towards life... :)

PS
Thanks for the review! I really appreciate the it! My spelling sux (no school :)) but I fixed it.

Flame? Not at all. I don't know what to say ... it was well written [ofcourse], I'm just at a loss for words.

I actually liked this one....Nice....Keep going

flame, pourquoi- c'est beau! I can't see anyone trying to force people to cough up poems on a topic not chosen by the author...even if it is class...

TO