 mtmcl 2004-12-06 . chapter 1I LOVE THIS POEM!A masterpiece! |
 Mista Mugs 2004-08-21 . chapter 1Another great one. In fact, I do believe I shall add it to my favorites list, as I shall do with you.
I really like your pieces.
Keep up the good work.
~Magnus |
 little red line 2004-02-24 . chapter 1My eyes got really wide when I was reading this.This is a huge metephor type thing.I just now have an obbsesion with moths.Love this. |
 bloodbloom 2004-01-31 . chapter 1 wow. ^^ i loved it! |
 Scarlet Starfire 2004-01-01 . chapter 1Wow, that was so good. I've heard about moths and how they are attracted to flames from a different poem(Archy poems by Don Marquis, very funny, but i don't know if you'd be into it) but you wrote this soo well! I wish I could write like that. |
 H. M. Banson 2003-12-07 . chapter 1Wow... it's hard to believe that a poem about a moth could evoke so much emotion... but this isn't really about moths, is it.
great poem... very powerful in unexpected ways
Always,
~Hollie |
 Jukia Wolfcall 2003-12-03 . chapter 1Amazing. I've read all your work and all I have to say is amazing. I cant imagen writting stuff this good. I tried after reading some of your poems, but still. I like yours better. I dont know where you got the Idea of moths and flame (prolly from watching a moth) but I just think your amazing. |
 DIEDELETED 2003-09-22 . chapter 1One phase: Fav. Author List. |
 pleasecometrue 2003-07-20 . chapter 1I love your work, you have an amazing amount of talent... Great poem! |
 LaureLalaith 2003-05-21 . chapter 1omg, i love all of your poems. this one is no exception |
 SinNombre26 2003-03-04 . chapter 1oh nice metaphor, one of the best i ever read, adding this and you to my favs now |
 Black Dragon4 2002-05-19 . chapter 1reminds me of over pertective parents, friends and siblings. Very good. |
 dragonfire 2002-05-07 . chapter 1 Wow. I guess we're all moths, in some way. And living without wings isn't even really living at all... just becuase you're breathing doesnt mean you're alive. I love the metaphor - that is the right word, isnt it? |
 Angel Fujin 2002-04-25 . chapter 1beautiful.... very nice I love your poems SO much. |
 gasoline rainbows 2002-04-21 . chapter 1Wow, this is soo wonderful. People have tried to tame me for so long, and what Tom said below, the quote from the self-harm website is soo true. Even when cutting used to be a last resort out of my collection of vices, it still rang true. Very nice. |