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| mtmcl 2004-12-06 ch 1,  | abuseI LOVE THIS POEM!A masterpiece! |
| Mista Mugs 2004-08-21 ch 1, | abuseAnother great one. In fact, I do believe I shall add it to my favorites list, as I shall do with you. I really like your pieces. Keep up the good work. ~Magnus |
| little red line 2004-02-24 ch 1, | abuseMy eyes got really wide when I was reading this.This is a huge metephor type thing.I just now have an obbsesion with moths.Love this. |
| bloodbloom 2004-01-31 ch 1, anon. | abusewow. ^^ i loved it! |
| Scarlet Starfire 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was so good. I've heard about moths and how they are attracted to flames from a different poem(Archy poems by Don Marquis, very funny, but i don't know if you'd be into it) but you wrote this soo well! I wish I could write like that. |
| H. M. Banson 2003-12-07 ch 1, | abuseWow... it's hard to believe that a poem about a moth could evoke so much emotion... but this isn't really about moths, is it. great poem... very powerful in unexpected ways Always, ~Hollie |
| Jukia Wolfcall 2003-12-03 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. I've read all your work and all I have to say is amazing. I cant imagen writting stuff this good. I tried after reading some of your poems, but still. I like yours better. I dont know where you got the Idea of moths and flame (prolly from watching a moth) but I just think your amazing. |
| DIEDELETED 2003-09-22 ch 1, | abuseOne phase: Fav. Author List. |
| pleasecometrue 2003-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI love your work, you have an amazing amount of talent... Great poem! |
| LaureLalaith 2003-05-21 ch 1, | abuseomg, i love all of your poems. this one is no exception |
| SinNombre26 2003-03-04 ch 1, | abuseoh nice metaphor, one of the best i ever read, adding this and you to my favs now |
| Black Dragon4 2002-05-19 ch 1, | abusereminds me of over pertective parents, friends and siblings. Very good. |
| dragonfire 2002-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I guess we're all moths, in some way. And living without wings isn't even really living at all... just becuase you're breathing doesnt mean you're alive. I love the metaphor - that is the right word, isnt it? |
| Angel Fujin 2002-04-25 ch 1, | abusebeautiful.... very nice I love your poems SO much. |
| gasoline rainbows 2002-04-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is soo wonderful. People have tried to tame me for so long, and what Tom said below, the quote from the self-harm website is soo true. Even when cutting used to be a last resort out of my collection of vices, it still rang true. Very nice. |