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Reviews For: Trap, Torture, Tame... It's for the best - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

mtmcl
2004-12-06
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE THIS POEM!A masterpiece!
Mista Mugs
2004-08-21
ch 1,
abuseAnother great one. In fact, I do believe I shall add it to my favorites list, as I shall do with you.
I really like your pieces.
Keep up the good work.
~Magnus
little red line
2004-02-24
ch 1,
abuseMy eyes got really wide when I was reading this.This is a huge metephor type thing.I just now have an obbsesion with moths.Love this.
bloodbloom
2004-01-31
ch 1, anon.
abusewow. ^^ i loved it!
Scarlet Starfire
2004-01-01
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was so good. I've heard about moths and how they are attracted to flames from a different poem(Archy poems by Don Marquis, very funny, but i don't know if you'd be into it) but you wrote this soo well! I wish I could write like that.
H. M. Banson
2003-12-07
ch 1,
abuseWow... it's hard to believe that a poem about a moth could evoke so much emotion... but this isn't really about moths, is it.
great poem... very powerful in unexpected ways
Always,
~Hollie
Jukia Wolfcall
2003-12-03
ch 1,
abuseAmazing. I've read all your work and all I have to say is amazing. I cant imagen writting stuff this good. I tried after reading some of your poems, but still. I like yours better. I dont know where you got the Idea of moths and flame (prolly from watching a moth) but I just think your amazing.
DIEDELETED
2003-09-22
ch 1,
abuseOne phase: Fav. Author List.
pleasecometrue
2003-07-20
ch 1,
abuseI love your work, you have an amazing amount of talent... Great poem!
LaureLalaith
2003-05-21
ch 1,
abuseomg, i love all of your poems. this one is no exception
SinNombre26
2003-03-04
ch 1,
abuseoh nice metaphor, one of the best i ever read, adding this and you to my favs now
Black Dragon4
2002-05-19
ch 1,
abusereminds me of over pertective parents, friends and siblings. Very good.
dragonfire
2002-05-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow. I guess we're all moths, in some way. And living without wings isn't even really living at all... just becuase you're breathing doesnt mean you're alive. I love the metaphor - that is the right word, isnt it?
Angel Fujin
2002-04-25
ch 1,
abusebeautiful.... very nice I love your poems SO much.
gasoline rainbows
2002-04-21
ch 1,
abuseWow, this is soo wonderful. People have tried to tame me for so long, and what Tom said below, the quote from the self-harm website is soo true. Even when cutting used to be a last resort out of my collection of vices, it still rang true. Very nice.
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