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ScarletWishingstar 2003-09-24 . chapter 1
me again...
I like it, even if it is kinda literal (i luv figurative language rather than just coming out n saying sumthing...i think its cuz i cant write figuratively...oh well, back to u!). I think that a good title would be "Just Me", since shes talking about being alone, and since she did once have other ppl in her head but not anymore...its just her...or him...wotever...good job!
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Twinsnake Coatl 2002-10-10 . chapter 1
Keep calling out milady, someone is bound to listen.
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