I agree with the previous reviewer that the first paragraph especially needs a little flow-work. In the third paragraph I think saying "It happened in January. Now it's December." would be better but that's minor.
I really liked it. It was touching, and the ending was beautiful. The last sentence really makes the story and I love endings like that.
Great work.

In first paragraph, work on making things flow. You have a run on, so try to split it up or add commas where needed.
like this
I remember coming home to find him trying to cook dinner but just letting it burn up instead. Then we would go out to eat instead of trying to piece together his burnt dinner (or somethig like this. Or you can try to add the "going out to eat" part in the first sentence. Be creative).
He wasn't very bright. At times, he would put the milk in the cupboard and the cookies in the fridge because he once said that "cookies were good cold".
The whole piece needs work like this. Some minor grammer and flow stuff, so it is easy to fix. You don't ever get the finished product without working on it.
Great stuff, really moves you.
9.1/10

'Anyone who visited the grave site saw not one but two' sad, but v. well done. short & sweet. i normally h8 romance stuff, but this is good.

No no no. Yar that was sad. :'( But still a good fic. anyways. Actually i think it was the sadness that made it good. Ack how depressing

::sniff:: You just love to write stuff that makes me wanna cry, don't ya mate? Ah well. That was a really sad story, but really cool all the same.