Pretty good so far but I'm curious as to why the story has little symbols in it. It's pretty distracting with them in there but I think I can manage to ignore them. Keep up the good work and you might get somewhere fast.

more more more! ^_^ again with the weird symbol thingies but maybe it's just my computer, you must post more some day

w00t! btw this ami, jen's friend. y'know haruko takahashi from xanga? heh, i like this a lot so far, although might i make a sujestion? thoughout the piece i noticed weird symbols have been put thought the piece and i think that's a html error so you might want to double check that again, or it just didn't transfer well. other than that, great stuff! keep going!