Reviews for In the Fusion Pit

Beth 2004-05-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI don't know whether you'd rather be a musician, a dangerous man in tailored suit or a solider. Still, very well written.
An Anonymous Tipster 2002-10-22 ch 1,	abuseYes, indeedio. Good like it maters>
pennydeath 2002-07-16 ch 1,	abuseWoooow....um...okay...Cool at describing stuff, but I came away thinking "Huh?" Well, it was cool.
midnights shadow 2002-05-11 ch 1,	abuseNot sure I caught the meaning of this. But did like the gritty imagery. It's so much easier to write from the dark side...
K. Hallett 2002-05-05 ch 1,	abuseI really like the imagery you use...its so vivid and descriptive without being obvious and trite...nice job
Kingdoms 2002-04-28 ch 1,	abuseWhat the...? this is fully twisted... echooed from the darkness pulled into the working class driven to the hard labour's and falled backwards where hense it came from the dark depths... I like...
maddened milch 2002-04-23 ch 1,	abusewow, i love your use of colors and sounds, it creates a great image in you head.
Suicidal Butterfly 2002-04-23 ch 1,	abusethis is a bit freaky and gives me the distaste of choking on ciggaret smoke. ............And what's wrong with being freaky? i I think that's a virtue, grins
Rini 2002-04-20 ch 1,	abuseI love this! Great images, wow. I dunno, I really like it. Keep writing,