very good, and yes i can relate

I hate to tell you this but i can relate to this song alot! i feel this everyday of my miserable life! But i like the song alot cus it describes and helps releases alot of anger by reading it

sad..but true. i can relate

Aww, youre not a wh0re Ian. Anyways, youre still better than me. I especially like the last stanza..keep it up, Farf!

very powerful and disturbing

Whoa... Dark _ Sorry I didn't review this earlier. I haven't been to for... ages and ages '' Anyway, it's really good! I like the ending especially _ Good work!

wow really good

Makes me think. And that's hard to do. *l* No, but really...it's awesome.

I can't really relate, nor do I know anyone who does, and I hope I never will. I have heard so many stories of sexual abuse in my time, but none of them have been so in-depth to the emotions as this one has. Gets a 10/10. I got some new stuff, could you take a look for me? I would appreciate it.

taking a turn from the ian-norm (), this seems to be an experimental piece with obvious talent behind it but also room for expansion. strong beginning, interesting imagery, but it's hard for my to 'visualize' (visualize?) the ending.. perhaps if it was a slow, decending fade out it could be pulled off. in the words of dee french: very nice! *in that twisted, not-quite-raped way...*

Well... I think this song is more poemish than songish. I don't understand the whole "whore" reference. I mean, unless you can relate to these things. It's also kinda contradictory, like first a "whore" and then a want to be "loved". That's in a way a good touch to such an emotional song. I'm not sure the whole suffocation thing is accurate, unless you mean more of isolation from the world and fear of being loved. Sigh... keep writing, and hopefully you never have to relate to this song.

i dont think its very much like control but oh well _ THIS SONG ROCKS!

silly boy! I know where the idea came from. You feel this. maybe you've never been raped literally, but on an emotional level you have. You just took that experience, magnified it and twisted and prodded the emotions a bit until they fit this scenario perfectly. That way, you have a nice little screen of fiction betwen you and your truth. No one can trace it back to you and you can imagine that it never happened. Am I anywhere near right? lol. not a bad song ian. angsty, but slightly diffrent from your norm. nice.

Dark, but not of the intese and lyrical variety! Sharp, poignant, and biting.

Puddle of Mud, much? o.o This seriously reminded me of 'Control' only twisted around in the eyes of the victim. I really like it. Very good...again ;;.