Oh, *sniffle*. so sad... Good job, Anni.

Hey Annika, never knew you likes writing about these stuff. Very very very good, I like the perspective on which you wrote it. If I wrote something like that you know it would be way darker - he'll probably kill the guy and the love and then suicide himself or something......
*Cyanide4Suicide*

Wow, heart breaking! Very moving writing, I felt totally involved in the characters you created, particularly the man watching the woman he loved marry someone else. Lovely.

hista sia eallyra oodga! ok, bak from pig latin (sry, im just really hyper) newayz, this is really good and really sad, itz almost as though u can feel the pain hez going through :'( *tear* a very moving piece i think! keep writing!

to write this so well u must have been married. amazing... i really do love ur work. :0)