This story sucks, all i can see is one paragraph. its says its 1684 words, yeah one paragraph.

I liked it alot jess, the story was good...

wow...very emotional...i think i'm going to cry...
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Jess that effin rawked. I hope that Laura read it so she can be freaked out. Shes such a ho. Great Work!

That was sad! I've had bad days before, but good God, not that bad! I feel sorry for her and the innocents who got shot, but over all, it was an excellent piece of work. You write really good stories ^_~ Keep up the writing.

~Cecilia

OMG!!! That was good! I could acully see that! wow your a great writer! love your storys!

WOW...SO TRUE AND REAL. SPOOKY BUT GREAT

...I don't suppose your a 13 year old depressed girl are you..? Only i've noticed a pattern emurging in some of your fics!!! ^^; You are, like an incredably talented auther!!! You should write books! I know I'd buy them!!!

Wow, you´re turning into my fav writer.
When I was younger I felt like this and I hated everyone telling me it was just a phase, that good friends liked you for what you are and not for what you look like, and all that rubbish. Some people don´t understand that pain hears no reasons. It just hurts.

another tear jerker,i know what its like to be made fun of,but i would never kill.

this is so realistic, and it resembeles the song perfectly. i can promise you that you have a carreer as a writer ahead of you!

That was really really good. I would write more like this if i were you!!

Excellent idea, shoot them all. Yes in fact you should do this too. BLAST 'EM ALL TO HELL! Hehe seriously though, good fic.

hmm, good idea, bring gun to school and kill that little ** tracey, perfect! good story!

it is identical to a nightmare i had, where i was lindsay