Well, that was a bit confusing, but it might have something to do with the fact that I haven't read anything else you've written. I AM curious now, however, so I guess I'll keep reading!^^ And if you have the time, read "Everstone," its a short fantasy I wrote, and I want to know what people think...

~_^ Alira

This is cool. I like Derian, and I ADORE Lucan. I also think it's really sweet that Derian chose Lucan over Sybil, and I loved the scene between Lucan and Derian just before Derian left. Aw. *sniffle* THEY LOVE EACH OTHER!

Celestina

I like this so far. You have a nice writing style and I like Lucan alot. I feel bad for him.. his culture just doesn't understand or respect him. Poor guy.. I look forward to further chapters! :)

yay! update... but it was shorter than ususal... ;_; Hope you write more soon! Ganbatte!!! ;) ja~!

YAY!! Bout time!! ^__^ I can't wait for the next chapter!!

I absolutely adore the way you write. Seriously I have to say this is the best original story I have read in ages. I'm off to read more of your stuff and I do hope you add more to this story, cause I really like how it's going.

i hope derian comes back soon. go lucan! ^^ does sybil know that derian loves lucan?? anywho, i hope you update soon. ja~! ^^

wai wai! you didn't tell us on Ataniell that there was more!! thanks!

aza :)

A very intriguing story. Keep up the work. I look forward to more chapters.

Very cool so far. It's sort of strange, but I mean that in a good way. Got me to thinking which, to me, makes the story good in my mind. I love your character development so far, you're good at that. The story has a very promising plot, keep going with it!

Hey, cool story. I think there's been way too much anime fiction being written out there, so it's nice to see a new storyline. I hope you add more chapters. (and it's so good, i ain't even gonna ask for a lemon scene. hehe.)

nice.....i hope u continue to write more. i think lucan should be respected for being a healer tho. if they didn't have a healer then they wouldn't get better from battle wounds n stuff like that. kayz, baiz! really kewl story. ur writing style is nice ^^

Oooh I like this one muches!! Yesss. I hope you update it soooon! Lemon scene maybe?? XD