This looks to be very very ineresting, will you continue it?
~Tris

Now, that wasnt confusing!^^ Heh, I understood that better than the other story of yours that I started reading, but this one isnt finished... Hmm, my only problem so far is that this is only one chapter, so when it IS finished, I wont be able to say what I think. Good though... what else can I say?

~_^ Alira

Hey, this is fun so far. I hope you continue it :)

Oh god, angels!!! I love this so much!

Why haven't you posted this to our list, it would be perfect?

Azalais :)

Very interesting concept for this one. I like Ariel's personality, strange as that may be ^_-. Well, good stuff, this story, keep with it ^_^

I really liked reading this story! I think it's really good! The only thing that's strange is that i'm reading about a guy that has my name, lol and i'm a girl not a guy! I think that the idea you have is very interesting and i hope you write more soon!
~Blue Froggie~

where's the rest??

i absolutely loved this!!!! sexy angels, can it get better then that? I submit to you that it can not! Please write a sequel!! I'm dying to know what happens next.

*chants* more more more more more!!! Ohman I love stuff like this!!! XD