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| Izzy Insane 2002-05-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseso, Seb, finally caught up with you. so far, it's interestng. you're probably still in Sarnia now, right? -see you soon. -Izzy Insane? |
| Showstopper (too lazy to si... 2002-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood job with this chapter. I like the new villains, especially Iyor. I've got a sneaking feeling that he could be turned to the good side before this is over. The crime boss for the Japanese Golden Glocks is cool too. I liked how he escaped his death. The interrogation bit with Team A was nice as well as the fight with Megumi and Black Cat. Looking forward to the next chapter. Have a good day, :) |