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| For What Its Worth 2006-04-17 ch 1,  | abusethat has got to be the funniest,most original romance-like one-shot i've ever read. |
| aphroditeseyes 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is hilarious. You have a real talent for humour. |
| The baava Project 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuse*snort* Good lord, I'm not sure what I think of this one. It was kind of . . . painful. Not in a bad way, but jeez! LOL! I love how everyone was playing everyone else - nicely done. Actually, I think I like your character descriptions best. Manuel is my favorite. I know EXACTLY the type of man he would be! Awesome work, there . . . But, painful. hee. I love it! I bet you had loads of fun putting this together. ja ne! LoK |
| Kimberly 2004-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was hilarious! I loved the ending, totally didn't see that coming. I love the cliche of it all, it's just a little feel good western short story. That's really all I can say; other than GOOD JOB! Keep it up, I'd like to see another one similar to this. |
| William Winters 2004-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI was wondering how you were going to have a G-rated western! Very well done! 10/10 |
| Mbwun 2003-08-18 ch 1, | abuse:) Very funny, you've got a wonderful sense of humor. A fitting homage to the spaghetti western. ~He Who Walks On All Fours |
| Tafkae 2003-06-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was all a ploy to get Cole hooked up with Tempest? And it WORKED?!! Oh my God, this is great... and.. funny, and stuff. I wasn't expecting that ending ^_^ |
| Light of Day 2003-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really good story, and a nice change. I like to read funny stories, but a lot of the stories on this site in the humor section go something like, "So-and-so was going somewhere when suddenly she was attacked by rabid bunnies from Mars. She would have been able to escape, had they not teamed up with a herd of giant staplers..." And so on. This was amusing, but also well written and it had a plot. Good job. :-D |
| Le Meg 2003-03-04 ch 1, | abuseLet's just say I've still got tears in my eyes because of this. I knew I always liked westerns. |
| aceinit 2002-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThis makes the 3rd or 4th time I've read this story and it just keeps getting funnier and more cleaver (cleaverer? whatever.) You have a true knack for nailing nuances of plot and throwing your readers with a surprise ending. Awesome! More spoofs! |