This is so deep, disturbing, and hating all wrapped up into one poem. This is so awesome. You have great talent. It reminds me of one of my friends who went through something like this. She never knew if anyone was her friend or if she was being betrayed.

I know EXACTLY how you feel. It's hard when no one's there for you. Beautifully written. Wish I had this much talent!! (")(^_^)(")

hey.. sorrie my friends are like that too. so it describes what i feel too

*smiles sadly* well.... my friends were
just pretending to be my friends...
So this poem really describes the both of us....

*sob* oh so sad.. Everything is so moving.

I will be your friend.

Ouch... I'm sorry your friends are like that, but things will work out if you let them. They always do.

Hey this is a good poem i write poetry as well not as good though i hed some up but know one read um so i took um down life can be soooooo depressing

i really like this one! its like how i feel bout my friends. its really good, keep writting

awwww. I hate it when my friend dont understand me either :( great poem. write more.

i like this poem alot, it's really good, I like the line 'betrayal is all I tend to see' thats awesome. I feel the same exact way about my friends.
p.s. thank you so much for the nice note!

KElly, I'm not mad at you. But when all u talk about is suicide it gets annoying. I understand that ur going through some hard times but lieing to urself isn't the way to be. ur probably much happier than u exepct
well heres the revie
lotz of Luv
sara

i have a friend like you. Well i like your peom a lot it really is an eye opener