reminds me of hemingway "the sun also rises". like brett and jake, or something.

sorry. i'm a hemingway follower.

i like this so much

wow.

my god. tragically violently wonderful

ok, ach i can only think of vonnegut for this one. and i can see the massacre. the bombings, and the dead, the trapped dead.

this is more than good

im sorry. again, i cannot give this any kind of a worthy review. i just want you to know that i am feeling, and your words make feeling and that feeling dosnt go back into words very well and im babbling and maybe if next time it would be okay for me to just type some letters in the box some random letters and then you would know how good your stuff is?

confusing and yummy. not to say i was confused. but, confusing. the whole thing reminds me of a sour piece of hard candy. again, it would be better in past tense. you shouldn't write everything in present.

i love them all. hmm... I wish I could say something to justify how good all of your work is, but I'm too inarticulate, so why bother? hehe. you kick **.

Awesome! You amaze me, you really do. How can you pack so many thought-provoking and emotional things into such a short work? That takes some real talent, which you have in abundance. You're going on my favorite authors list right now. keep it up.

i liked this. each scene is something so sordid, candid and elusive... unique as always. nod to author.