Oh dear, how very sad!! It is still a very good story and I liked it a lot. P.S Keep up the good writing Witch of the Snitch (hee hee hee hee mmmmmwwwhhhhaaaaa haaaa haaaa haa!)

good, good i'm impressed^_~V

nnnnnnnnn0000000000000 ... whoops-ie-daisy.... i meant nnnooooooooooooooooo....

now where wus that bottom that i wus meant to rite ... oh yes i am meant to rite wot i rote last time!!! ok weel hear i go ggo

Oh pooper... where for art thou pooper? well go on then ... pooper where are u?

Now to rite about the storie...

It wus a berry gut storie... and berry touching too. But me thinks that it could have bean improved if that Annie girl had have died a longer and more painful like death!!!!!!!!

Keep up the sky ... and stories about peoples who just happen to die a longer and more painful-like death...

Luv always me!!!!

now for my fav part...
$$$ $$$$ money , money holds the key to her past... dear money i"ve found u at last!! i've spent sleepless nights and my budget was tight...
but it all disappeared way too fast,
money holds the kkeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyy to ... her...PAST!!!!
molaa la moolaa laa laa

MOOOOOO LA LA!! da da da.
that's all there is ... there isn't anymore...

pleez feel obliged to review my review!!!
Thank u. thank u berry much

Gumpkin has now left the vegetable patch
(my dad put on toomuch fertiliser -cow poopoo)

OK now i will finish ....
soon

$$$ $$ $$$$$$ oh yea...the storie ... the storie wus gut. berry gut. sew gut i mite hav too stoop riting know....

nowe fore thee paragrapge withe righte speelinge...

That was a truly touching story even though it could have been improved if Annie had have died a longer andmore painful death... and of course if U had included me!!!

$$$ $$$$ money !!!!!!!!!

You killed Annie, you wretch! And it was ALL JESS'S FAULT!!!! Mwahaha!

u kiled annie..... :(.... sad story. ..... (so i can state the obvious) i hope u write more stories like this... but perhaps u should let annie live???