Very sweet and beautiful. I like everything about this story, and can't really find any flaws. Keep up the good work. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo

Aw...That's a deep romance. Usually they're just kiss, hug, sex, i love you. How is that romance?

But I think you get it, and this story explains it. Perfectly.

SALAD DAYS RULES ALL!! Great story. I loved it!! ^-^

That is really really good, I enjoyed reading it. You should continue it...like a sequel or something.

*sniff* That was really great...bravo ^_^

I am now adding this to my favorite fics list.

This one truly reminds me of a past experience. The effect of which is that now i've got a really nice girlfriend (eerie how she looks just like a certain LH character). Really touching at points, which is amazing since I tend to be rock hard when reading.

A good author makes readers imagine, a great one makes readers believe. And this is the most believable story I have ever read.

Well, that's my two cents.

This was such a sweet story, I can't lie that I gto teary eyed near the end. It was fabulous! If you keep up this kind of quality you have yourself a huge fan (me). Keep up the great work. Je ne!

such a wonderful story ill never be able to write somthing like that

I am really really touched that you wrote a sweet story like this because of Salad Days. Glad I was a good influence! Maybe you should try writing more one-shots/vignettes like this. :)

that was SO SWEET!