Hey Ally...mom=mother; dad=father; 3rd paragraph:then=than

I really like the story so far...I didn't get to read it at school but its really cool...definately want to keep reading and find out what happens!!! :)

Hi hi! Like your story! Why`d you make her leave the castle?!?! is Aaron going to follow her??? He should! lol...Quite a bit has happened so far and theres only three chapters....good friend comes back...learned magic...someone dead...already a kiss too! hehe...let me know when the next chapter is up so i can read it and review it, kk? kk! Lataz!
~Mitsukai-chan