Wow...excellently done. I give you an applause )

It's simple, but not the simplest. A good idea put to use D

Good job )

it's not weird... hey, it could even be made into a song! ...well, sort of... i dunno, i'm just babbling...

baibaiyukie

I was scrolling quickly down your file to see which things to read and I stopped here. Geez...this is deep...you should become a poet/author thingee...I bet hundreds of peoples would love your poems, they seem to...you would famous like... :D This was deep. Argh I like this! _

Chibiheartdragon

verry cool i like it alote. thank you for reviewing my poem too. :)

this was wonderful. It hits on personal levels with alot of people. Not just physical abuse causes this, verbal abuse and lots of other types of abuse as wel.

Wow... deep yet sad, keep it up though! Don't hold it in!