I seriously wish you would update this! I remember reading it YEARS ago, like when I first came on this site, adding it to my favourites and then that was it. No more updates.

It saddens me.

I'm 22 and non-updated fiction saddens me. I think I need a life.

Hmph.

I really thought the reason why he hated hospitals would be that his girlfriend or something died. Like a regular cliche but one that would work, especially with your writting style but the alternative is even more depressing. What kind of sick person does that? she sounded nice too. And I'm glad Lionel got some sleep and he even asked Ashley to go out with him! how cute. Liked this chapter a LOT!

I'm so sorry, I have to comment real quick because the relationship Ashley has with that racoon is out of this world, lol, omg! His life is so ** but he's such a positive person and I love that. I also love Mr. gloomy Lionel and they make such a cute couple. I relaly wonder what happened to Lionel though...guess I gotta read an d find out. This is such a cute story btw

WHY DON'T YOU UPDATE IT'S BEEN OVER SIX YEARS

GAH

I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY TOO.

Is it just me or has this story not been updated for 5 and a half years?
:(

Aw this story is so cute!
(And you almost have 400 reviews!)

I forgot to say that it's ridiculously impossible that you only have 392 or so reviews!

So I've been looking for a sign about a new chapter because you really are my god. I saw the whole 'Angel of Ceffeine?! Good things happen to those who wait' thing. What's that MEAN!? Do I need to send an email or something to get an answer. Sorry if I'm being annoying (I'd hate to be one of those awful people that only have 'update' and 'more' in their vocabulary), but I cannot help it if I love you. Scrath that, I worship you! You do realize that you are on most author's favorite lists. It's impossible to not think about you. This is turning into some weird stalkerish review. It's not like that, I promise. But your story is like liquid gold. Except it's not liquid. It's just awesome. LOVE

:)
this is freaking effing cute. i love it. :)

I just came across this story by accident truthfully...and now, I'm addicted. It's very good, and I love your sense of humor. I would love to know what happens next...it can even be an open-ended story...but please finish it in some way, I beg of you...you left off at a cliffhanger...or at least announce it's not going to be finished (I don't mind if you've lost interest in it or whatever...) just some kind of notice please.

yes, I know...it's been a while since you wrote this...but it diesn't change the fact, that I absolutely loved it and would go down on my knees to beg for another chapter...please?!

...What? No! You can't have left it here! D:

Amazing story, you do not know how gutted I am it's not been updated. :(

ermm..sorry to sound cliche/like a broken down tape recorder/like most of the people before urs truly/like a total parrot but could u pls update as curiosity not only killed the cat, it darned near killed me too. so yea.though my imminent death is of no concern to u.thanx!

^_^ Aww. This is so cay-ute! Totally love your story! please update soon [sorry I don't have anything more useful to say]

I just picked a random chapter to review.

Listen, I'm that psycho person who e-mailed you a couple of times and called myself 'An Avid Reader' and my name is now 'My Chemical Music Box' as you can see.

I just really wish you could pick this story up again because it is killing me and a lot of other fans of this story that you aren't writing anymore of this.

I've done all that I can and you still won't pick up this story or reply to one of my e-mails, not even to just tell me ** off. So please just reply to my e-mails and give me some info on what the hell you are doing with this story.

Please.

from My Chemical Music Box/An Avid Reader/laurenandspyro

PS: I have added this story to my favourites list and added you to my favourite authors list. (The spam poem and Ramen Noodle poem are so funny)

So again Please