Loved the use of colors in this:

"He, in twilight blue.

And he, in dawnlit white"

Beautiful! Love your stuff...and this wasn't weird! God, compared to some of mine...:)

You're right. It is weirder than normal, but it's still as great as your other works. This elegant piece of work almost makes me sigh at the end. It just gives you that feeling that you're reaching for something that impossible to get. Marvelous work!