Yup

nice poem, but i think that you can win in the battle life!

if you have a goal

and fight for a worthy cause,

you can win in life

(a haiku i made up for you right on the spot, hope you like it)

good job, anyway! keep writing!

I like how it's short and to the point. Good work!

Very true...Very, very true...

The one, Queen Dagger Tribal, down below me a few reviews, that's my happy account. This one is my depressing account. I have to review this again. I think this is so true. It's short, simpl, and straight to the point of this damned world. It explains exactly what I think of it. This is perfect just the way it is. I luv it.

hey there, what a touching poem! i can totally relate to it! keep it up!

Ohh! sad! I feel so...so hopeless! If thats the message then awesome job becasue my good mood is totally ruined now! lol I'm just kidding. Its good stuff..I'm going to read some more!

a bit depressing but I like it... I think it is really clever! )

I'll tell you what i think...

its true.

(i think thats all that needs to be said)

I like it. Short but so true. You only neede four lines to explain it. I love it. You are so good. You should write more!

This is really good! You should try writing a haiku. They're only 3 lines long. 5 syllables on the 1st line, 7 syllables on the 2nd line, and 5 syllables on the last line. Try it. I wrote lots. They're fun.

I love it! Short, sweet, and concise. Defintely a good one. Thanks for your review by the way, and toodles! _

One word...WOW. You are good, I have to agree I like short poetry to. :) Maybe you could check out mine to, :) THanks

p.s. Keep it up you are defiently a good writer.

this is great, it doesn't matter that it's short!

4 lines was enough for this! Too true, too true. And... I'd probably at least try to say more on why I liked this, but it's late and I'm tired. Anyway, I liked it.