You have a wonderful way with words, but the story seems to be lacking something... I don't know... maybe purpose? I got the same impression when I read Dead Man Walking and Origins. They don't show your full...passion I guess. Elysium on the other hand seemed to really grab your attention; it didn't just seem to be a random idea. I don't know. You're an awesome writer though.

very - i loved the ending and you developed the characters really well.

I love your writing style--it's wonderful. Everything's near perfect, save for a single typo/spelling mistake. In the 4th to last paragraph, it says he "prided the door open"--did you mean "pried the door open?"
Other than that, your story's great--and you have incredible word usage! :)

--Luna

Aw, you know, you really should write more about them, Dru. Not that I'm biased or anything. :]

Obviously Kenneth is human, yes?

This is very well written. You should expand on it!

Ooooh! All of your writing is superb! A total change of pace from some of your other stories. This was nice, just a brief glimpse into their world.
Warm, poetic, and quite sweet.

lots of nice detail, very sweet story. :)