Very nice. The characters were well-done, the plot nicely innovative. I loved the writing style, and I can't wait to see another chapter. I don't suppose you'd be willing to put me on your mailing lists, would you? I'd be forever indebted!

that was really good xcept u did not get to the point. but really really good (u should not say so much ((im not sayin' that its bad)) )all ya people that is reading this its a really good fanfix!!!!!~_~:> :) :} :]