er, i didn't really get it. i mean, after he sees that bird do they forget they ever met or something? um, i really don't get it but great work.

This is an amazing story. I really like it. I think it's cool the way you portrayed an emotion as a person. I was kinda confused a bit about the ending, was the bird still dead? Very cool story though.

I truly love your writing. It is truly some of the best that I have ever seen.

Keep up the wonderful - incredible - work. Have a good evening. :)

irony to the point of pain

i love that feeling.

dramatic and clean

... beautiful

(sometimes stories are so bad that you just have nothing to say in review and stare at the little box and then close it. and other times the story is just so incredibly good that you know you have to say something in review but nothing comes to your mind that is not trite and clicheed and stupid and not worthy, but you have to just say something, even just explaining yourself. so im sorry i could give this a good review it was just too good)

Wow. This story could have gone so wrong...and yet, it didn't. However, i would have liked it better in past tense.

that was absolutely great! i love it. really, i do. i wouldn't change a thing. you did excellent with it.

amazing. I love it, just like the rest of your stuff. :) Thanks for reviewing too.

this is good. deep.

Wow, spooky but so powerful... I love this! You are a very talented writer!

Incredible. Very thought inspiring. Awesome, awesome work. All of your work is great. Keep writing. ^_^

If it weren't for the "supernatural" genre added in there I woulda just thought this was some PMS fluff, but it's actually very poignant. Nice work, author. Again, very nice.

as ever:
s p y r e

Beautifully written