Wow, this is...interesting. I really like the story and stuff, but the upteenth time you use those wierd symbols it can get PRETTY annoying. The title is totally random, or at least it appears that way so far. What's up with the umbrellas and monkeys-taking-over-the-world business? Other than that, I guess this is okay. (Note: can you get working on that Saga of Eruune website?! PLEASE?! :-( )

I think you need to re-upload (or whatever you call it) this chapter. all the " marks are messed up... and yeah... stuff like that.

amy..... you kn ow i'm kidding!!!!













but i'm not BWA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!

man, amy. I am so hurt. am i not your friend? snif, did u forget me? Am i dead to you? snif, i do NOT feel loved. email me ONE FRIGGING GOOD REASON.... not to include me! Am i in Eugene still????? I'm amy's friend too! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! snif snif snif snif sniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiif. (**teardrops**)

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Yo, amy1 No offense, but where the HELL am I?????? i kinda feel left out...... but i'm only on ch 4 so i'll wait....... i'm watching you! every thing else is great! I feel Phlaughmeusseq!

Ch 6 I like cheese!

Awwwww.... It's the end! I don't want it to end! This is such an awesome and funny story! Only the ** and complaining is really funny! I love it! And Holly sounds sooooo funny! Tara is.... wired. *raises eyebrow* Stupid Yappappa madness thingie. Luckily for me, I have swords ringing about it my ears. ACK! That is so cool how it's the guy's initials! Hee hee. Awesome.... What's Kodamo? (right?) I can't remember! (Or do no know, that kind of thing happens.) Hee hee. Keep it up Aaron! And try to last through the year! Gooooo Aaron! And write more of this now! You're on a tight schedule and you WILL adhere to it, damnit! Hah! Keep up the awesome work, Chibi Lain! *thumbs up*

Ja ne and Aku Soku Zan!

Keebler \^-^/

Ch. 5 I like cheese!

The bully kid and Amy sound really funny! Heh heh. Suckers. Is that where you got U-chan's thing? I know that you only have one sister but did you get it from your sister or is that just a Chibi Lain thingie? Just wondering.... And Asher is such a cute and wonderful dude! Yeah! Let him stick up for you cuz, when he tires them out, you can step in and finish it off! Hee hee. Okay, so that's a Cindy thing....

So HAVE I ever mentioned my eternal love for this story? Cuz, ya know, I doooooo!!!! Love it love it love it! *glomps story* It's so kawaii and awesome and cool and everything! Love it! And love the Slayers inplay/input thingiemabobbers. Awesome. \^-^/

Aku Soku Zan!

Keebler \^-^/

Ch 4 I like cheese!

Oh, the Inverse gang? Yeah.... Poor Zelgadis.... *snif snif* Got that! So proud! *trying to think of Osaka and monotone dude but too lazy to come up with anything* And I knew that Ranma song that you were talking about -- it really does get into your head! And it is sooo annoying when it won't come out!

Still wonderful, still funny, love guys with Australain accents, so cool, want one, CLONES! Actually, that was funny! Hee hee. \^-^/ Where's Val? *starts looking around* Anyways, I will always love this story! It's vunderba!!! Ja ne!

Aku Soku Zan!

Keebler \^-^/

Ch 3 I like cheese!

Ack! What another wonderful and awesome chappie! This is just a way too cool and awesome story and I love it! It's so funny and original and has such depth! Heh! Awesome! Although your style seems a little different from The Saga of Eruune so is this a more recent thing? (Too lazy to check the bloody published thingie.) I can't wait for you to update and give us all the lowdown on your family! It's wonderful! Hee hee. Ja ne!

Aku Soku Zan!

Keebler \^-^/

Ch 2 I like cheese!

Awesome! This really is an outstanding fic and, despite the fact that I know that you know this, I start like all of my stupid sentences with anway. Or, ya know, anyways. Love to pluralize! Hee hee. Stupid stupidity.

Ah! So now I get who Amy is! Poor guy! Still four foot something! Life isn't fair! *most things aren't* Heh heh. And yes! Cheese IS a god! And you're just eating it to bask in its divinity -- point out the Last Supper! Ha hah! Cheese is awesome....

This is all really funny and really awesome! It rattles on and on and I love it! Very cool, very in-depth, very nice.

Ja ne! Aku Soku Zan!

Keebler \^-^/

Title: I like cheese! Author: Cinnabar Scarlett Section: Originals; Humor

Oh, my God that was toooo funny! It was really really awesome and really really pointless! You went into so much depth and detail and background -- I loved it! One question tho -- Who is Amy to you? Did I just not get that? *no clue* But I really really loved it! It was sooooo awesome! Good job. Why's Aaron's middle name something else tho? Why not Luke? You love the Luke! Just wondering! And wonderful stuff again! Hee hee! Awesome! *thumbs up*

Aku Soku Zan!

Keebler \^-^/

Yare, Yare...but you have a very noisy bunch to eat with Aaron-writer! Funny Tara too! Write more and include that lovely sarchastic wit we expect! Until next time...

Cinnabar, that story is sooooooo COOLIOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When are you going to add the magical mistycal 'Jane'? Guess who this is!!
Bet you can't figure it out by now!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA (demonic laughter)
Seeya! By the way Lobster Kitty was mine!!!!!!!

I fineshed the entire cheese story and I absolutly love it!!!! you have to
keep going on it. I want to see what happens in the rest of his classes.
I know what Ranma is I have only seen it a couple times but I will see if I
can find anything about the songs.Be sure to wright mare soon!

I love this chapter!!!!!!!!!(4) It is sooooo great!!!!!!!! I love the flamoose
thing(I dont have the patience to spell it the way you do)!!!!!! You are a
great writer!!!