DL:Ame-san!!!!! *sniffles* That is so mean! You're not supposed to make me cry.

Ken: Oh, like that's hard to do. *rolls eyes* We all know very well what a sap you are, dl.

DL: Be nice you. =P Yeah, but anyhoo. ^^ This is such a good story. I really do love it. It is going to be so killer not being able to read what you update over the summer! >

Whoa, niEmi!!! Freaky!!! Sorry it took me so long to read it. I love this. You'd better write more before I unleash my awesome powers of donuts on you!!!

You're writing isn't bad. It seems hasty, I reccommend going back and stretching things out a bit. Perhaps explaining why she changed and why he changed. Don't be afraid of stretching it out.

Oohhh. Freaky ame-san! This is REALLY good!!! I so want to read more now! *uses her most annoying whinny voice* Write mo~re!! ^^;;