This is brilliant, very acurate as well, nice job, I'd like to see more!

~Mlle. Daae

*LOL* This is so funny... but the good kind of funny, ya know? *lol* I'm still laughing! :) Good wording though!

Keep writing,
~Naomi~

It's great i love you haiku.
Midnight Bat

Oh yea...I remember a particular moment that was like that for me. It was 6th grade and we were learning the word sophisticated...my teacher used me as an example...I started sinking in my chair...lol

It's so true. I seem to always feel like this! *screams* *lol* Okay, well, cya!

And keep writing,
Vnomi. ;)

"Wanting to melt through the cracks." That line was awesome.


~Heart of the Sword

By far the best in the set.

AMAZING JOB!

Trinity Heart

No, I take that back... THIS is life in a nutshell! Your writings are the **! You're so stinking cool!

Trinity Heart

Life in a nut-shell...

Trinity Heart

*nods* uh-huh... -_-

Trinity Heart

*raises hand* Boda-bing, right here!

The Firey Tempered Haikuist,

Trinity Heart

Oh wow! That is like... so... I dunno... powerful! :S Great! Makes me kinda sad, ya know?? :S Okay, cya!!

Vnomi. ;)

*lol* Yep, I reckon! GREAT job! Maybe you should have put 'Want to do things, but I can't... instead of wanna because I dunno. Some people can get picky and stuff. Anyways, great! Keep writing strong!! :D

Vnomi. ;)

Oh my god! So true. You really describe the meanings in the titles of your haikus. I love the way you write. It always flows nicely!!

Vnomi. ;)

Great!

Vnomi. ;)