I've written so many poems in the past about these kind of things...about someone that you can't stop thinking about and someone who doesn't even know you exsist...

This was a very nice poem. It floweed very smoothly. Didn't have any big breaks and no big stops, but it had little stops where the readers could think of the line. It was a very nice job.

Nothing's wrong with fluff:). I'm in the mood for a good mushy poem anyway.

Hey- lovely little poem fluff- i can too tell the west side story basis (and i'm a little scared to tell the truth... :O) Actually, Westside Story has some high and amusing points, but i can't even watch this movie to laugh at... Anyways- when you doing Necromancer- that story is to die for and i wanna read more... (TO)

That was very nice to read.Although i'm not in the mood for lushy love peoms since i just told my boyfriend that it was over,but it was a great peom anyway and you are a great writer.

this is sweet, quite the fluff indeed, but nothings wrong with that. Good job ^^