Wow, and for simple writing when bored, its really good. Keep doing new stuff! I love it!!

creepy...i like it!

Spiffyness is apparent. Liking is also here. I smile with happiness for the good in the story.

ooooh.... 0.0 That's really... haunting. But moving on to more coherent sentences! (tee ^_^*) This is a really nice one, describes depression very well. I love how it hints at a story, yet it's not specific enough to be anyone in particular's. You have really Nice poetry ^__^ Keep it up! Oh, and thank ye kindly for giving me a review, I honestly wasn't expecting any and it was such a nice thing to do! I look forward to seeing more of your stuff. ^__~ Ja ne!

Dark and cool, just as I like.

Very nice poem. But in case you didn't know, you spelled silence wrong ^_^.

it evokes dark images, but its a good poem.