Sweet, very similar to my nightmares.

very good, well written. i'm so sure it could be published -.-

The past has hurtful things in it, some just shouldn't be dredged up; but no one can control their dreams and emotions-containing emoptions is very very bad. (trust me, i've done it b4) Anyways, i'll stop rambling and just say what i meant to: Excellent poem

i like... i dunno why, just like...

baibaiyukie

this is a really neat story. Liked how you described yourself after you had the nightmare.

Wow, excellent poem. It reminds me of Ryoko from Tenchi Muyo...

This was incredibly sad and scary, because it reminds us that pain doesn't release us during sleep... Great poem, I loved it.

This is my first review that I'm going to give you, so I will make it as non-arbatrary as possible. (I know that arbratary is not spelled right) The only fault that I can find is the first line of the poem is what I use to say in a bed time prayer

"Now I lay me down to sleep

I pray the lord my soal to keep

If I die before I wake

I pray the lord my sol to take"-I know that sol is not spelled right

excelent poem!

Not easy to break free of the past, is it?