really really good. it's written so well and it's definitely well though out. keep up the good writing.

Simply beautiful. The last line sent shivers down my spine.

cool

I like this, it'd be really cool to be used in a HP story, as the beginning of each chap...yes, I am writing a story on that genre. I really like this part to...it's awesome! Hehe! Later

~Mortania

This is as good as your other poem, Progession To Insanity. I hope you put some more up soon, I don't usually like poetry, but yours is frighteningly easy to conect with.
~WolfMoon~
P.S. Please continue with A Father's Sin soon, it's absolutely great!

Great. That's all I can say (speechless...).

Wow. That is just so amazing! I really REALLY like this it's just so...well I can't explain it... =it's just so...wow.

Wow... I love this! beautiful, it's a really great song! this is really well written :)

Gagou

*Is speechless.* Woah. This is some *serious* talent. Very, very, *very* good.

COOL! ^^ That would make a good song if you got the guitar part written. Correction, it would be even better because its already a good song.

:D

Holy crap that's good stuff.....I was ** cause you wouldn't write in A Father's Sin wel...I forgive you!!!!!!