   zayit 2005-04-25 . chapter 1The content is OK, but what I really like is that you managed to make it rhyme naturally. No forced inversions or out of place words here. Nice! |
 Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-01-19 . chapter 1Wow.
This is really good.
Really good.
I'm impressed. |
 SilveRain 2002-11-09 . chapter 1very well written poem...beautifully bleak...hmm...what else to say...triple cheers to insanity! =D yep...love the description and imagery...yep...
-SilveRain |
 howling wolf 2002-10-30 . chapter 1WOW |
 Shadow's Flower 2002-09-02 . chapter 1hey!!! ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!
now I'm the one who sounds like they're going insane!!!!!! This is very very very very very
,etc,etc, FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
signed, Queenie!!!
p.s. hurry up and post chap 40 of A Father's Sin,
it's great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
 WolfMoon 2002-08-14 . chapter 1KOOL!!!! I like it ... extremely intersting and frigtingly like my own mind... keep up the good work! |
 Setsuri 2002-07-14 . chapter 1 ... I like your poetry it's so whimsical and pretty!!!! Yay! ... hmmm..? .... I think I've been using too many periods today .... ummm ... I know! it's 'added' effect to my statement! *yes we will allow them to believe that for now, Muahahahhahahahahahhaha!* Ahem, anyways I likies your poetry and so far all of your other writings I can't wait to read the next thingy you write and hopefully remember to review. Bai Bai! |
 Deity 2002-05-11 . chapter 1I really like it! |
| Gagou 2002-05-08 . chapter 1 It reminds me a bit of what I thought during a period of my life... I like it, I think it's beautiful (a bit sad, though...) :) if you have more poetry written, let us know!
Gagou |
| Arabwel 2002-05-07 . chapter 1 THis is.... interesting, and very well written. I like it :) |
| Saerry Snape, who is very angry because the friggin' computer won't log in 2002-05-01 . chapter 1 Awesome. ^____^ |
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