If this is your best story, and I'm being honest here, why the hell did you ever start writing? See, we can all be honest in this thing called life. If you want to insult me fine! But next time make it constructive! Thankyou!

Woah. This is awesome. You have a lot of talent. I'd have to say that this is...erm...short and sweet! Yeah, that's it. And really good.