I have a friend kinda like this. It really hurts to see them destroying them selves. THeis is wonderfully written.

I wanna fly too! Okay, I don't want to be a pilot-but I still want to fly!

Very depressing...But very good! Great job!

This is so very touching. Your work is excelent. Kust as good as Devine Blessings'. Beautiful. Please keep it up.

Poem is very good.

I think I need to stop reading your sad stuff! But this kinda has a hopeful message in it. ::cheers up a little:: Its really good...but you talk about this friend as if he/she is real. Did this really happen? Your a good poet...gonna read some more!

Oh mi god (*oh mi god* I sound like Renee...*multiple shudders*).

I just can't think of losing you (or ne 1 of my friends) like that.

Sheila! U made me cry...

(it rules)

Great poem you can really get a feel for the emotions in the poem. Keep up the good work. Oh and I have added four more poems, review them please. Peace