 SaiMero 2008-12-15 . chapter 7you MUST update! This is the best story i've read all week! Please! |
 Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2007-05-03 . chapter 7Well, what else? |
 anonymous 2006-11-11 . chapter 4 Love potion=food poisoning, that's hilarious! I really like this story can't wait to read the next chapter! |
 anonymous 2006-11-11 . chapter 2 I really like Dash's character..he is so cute. Keep up the great story! |
 anonymous 2006-11-11 . chapter 1 Great plot! Keep it up :) |
 fallen_shinobi 2004-09-28 . chapter 7 im tellin u! continue dis fic or il hunt u down!! gwahahaha!! ^_^x dash is so damn kawaii! |
 SierraKnight 2004-09-01 . chapter 7'Ello! About the whole VGA thing: It's impossible to create a 100% new topic these days. Everything's been done before. No matter what you think of, its been done. The important thing is to take your version of the theme and make it unique, which I believe you've done quite nicely. I don't know if you'll continue this story or not, but don't let the flamers get to you. All my love, as always, and keep up the great work! ^_^ |
 Green Flamingo 2004-07-16 . chapter 7DO like leaving your stories at cliffies?!?!?!
I will get you if you don't finish this one too, I'm an eger beaver; I must have more of this and Mistake... You MUST finish them both.
~*Your RABID fan*~ |
 Green Flamingo 2004-07-14 . chapter 3 A lil Naive huh? purple poodles? He thought that Purple Poodles are toxic?! ::Slaps her knee and laughs almost falling off her chair:: Well, I'll remember to watch out for those purple poodles.
~Ciao~ |
 SailorLoneStar 2004-03-03 . chapter 7What?! YOU STOPPED RIGHT THERE?! *goes mad* It's SO GOOD! Quick and to the point, but enough to get everything in! *in McDonald's theme music* I'l Lovin' it! ^_~ Beautiful characterizations, and I love their relationship. Pooh to love at first sight, go Monster- IMEAN NAMIE! lol ^_~
UPDATE NOW! *evil glare* -SLS |
 personajxt 2004-02-18 . chapter 7 you have got to be one of the best authors i have ever read! Please update your Mistake series and this story asap because i'll be checking up on it a lot from now on! Keep up your good work! I can't wait until your next update! |
 Snowqueen/yukichan 2003-12-28 . chapter 7 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this!! you have not updated it for a year, yet it says to be continued! i really really would like to read more of this! hope to see more soon!
UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE |
 ntht 2003-12-28 . chapter 7Eh... One question: isn't it s'posed to be a FOUR-sided triangle 'cuz Namie likes Kit who likes Autumn who likes Isaki who is into girls like Namie? *Gasps for air* Now I AM confused... ^^ |
 Snowqueen/yukichan 2003-10-02 . chapter 7 I love this story! i like how every other chap is dash/namie. i love the way you write too! hope you update soon, Bcuz this is going to be an awesome story! |
 Laughing Cat 2003-06-20 . chapter 7*applauds* This is awesome so far. Heh. ^_^ |