Brilliant, though your poem might be a little more effective if only every other line rhymed. Otherwise, good job!
Lemon Drop

This is happier. I like this one. It's a *happy* poem, not a *sad* poem.

This is great! I loved it! Do you have any more?

Oh, how pretty. Wonderful imagery and good rhyming! The ending about unicorns in the sky... that was absolutely amazing. Great job!

Wow, that was very nice! It's amazing that you could make it all rhyme like that ^_^
"A starry night brings to mind / Their beauty—it blinds." That was the best! Keep up the awesome work!

Well, let me say out of the starting gate that *I* like it. Sad to say my workshop would butcher it simply because it rhymes (silly modern poetry ideas). But hey, it's hard to rhyme (says she who can't write formal poetry worth beans). Keep up the good work. I admire anyone who has the guts to write poetry and share it with others.

Lovely-- it's very hard to make everything rhyme, and it's an excellent first attempt at that sort of rhyming. Do you still have the link to the specific photo?

My favorite stanza is:
***
So one never should mourn
The passing of a unicorn—
They’ll live on, they’re reborn;
The night sky they’ll adorn.
***

Reminds me of... who was that Elf who got made into a star in the sky? And there was some other folktale about lovers who got made into stars... oh well, me don't remember. Anyway, great job! :)

"the mist-people"... *smiles* I like! And I am very much in awe of all that rhyming... quite the hard thing to do...write another one. (hee hee) aroo!