Very descriptive. You seem to have an exceptionally good idea of your friends. Very nice.

It's incredible, just like the rest of your works, but now wish me luck in interpreting it!

This is genius. :) great job. POST MORE I NEED MY SHINIGAMI FIX! lol. please ignore me, I am a result of too many pixie stix. My favorite part is the last stanza. Amazing, amazing job.

Great imagery. "A knife edged in chaos" is my favorite line. All in all...I love!

"Life to him is so dictionary defined, so ordered."

I love that! Lord, I know so many people like that...lol! Wonderful as usual!