*gasp*

AW. That was cute.

Keep it up!

Oh snap, she drives an evil car! Run Jude run. Anyway, this amuses me I hope you write more soon :D

6 and a half years or so... no update.
hahah.
I am guessing this one isn't going to be continued.
I thought it was pretty funny though.
As soon as Brandon started talking about his mom finding a new boyfriend right after Jude started talking about his dad finding a new girlfriend... it just clicked.
I like it a lot.
lol.
I can just... imagine the rest of it... :P
But I am going to put it on story alert... just in case...

what an /unconventional/*understatement* surprise.

I knew that was going to happen as soon as Brandon's mother pulled up. That was great!

Finish it! Please...?
Mercedes Lackey = LOVE

This looks interesting. I really hope you update

I guess you're not going to update this...but I really liked the beginning. I wish you would continue it! Pretty pretty please?

TBC.

Not. XD Who were you kidding? It's old and while I think it's cool to read something so old if you didn't write anymore in three years you're never going to.

Put BWH up. XDD

Hehehe. Seems like a nice start. Slightly cliche, yes, but over all, nice. Arg, I really want to read Magic's Pawn, but I just can never find a chance to actually buy it!

what to say, what to say...yeah, it looks like an awesome story if you'd just CONTINUE it...love jude's internal dialogue! i wanna know what happens next! please...

I think we are due an update, here!

:) Yeah, I really do. I hope you don't just leave this as it is..

If you cease to continue this story I will personally find out where you live and hunt you down.... *doing my best impression of a mean dangerous bad guy*


Or if that doesn't work:
PLEASE PLEASE SWEET YOU, CONTINUE!

thanks. :)

::glomplatchtackle:: thats so cool!!!! i really like how normal the conversation was between Jude (cool name btw ^_^) and Brandon is. and 'Magic's Pawn'!!!! i love that book! Vanyel is so cute ^_^!!! i liked the detail a lot. And Jude and Brandon seem really cool! please cotinue! (at least i hope you will!!) i tend to ramble a lot don't mind me. i'm really liking this so far! the fact that brandon's mom calls him 'Brandon-bear' amuses me to no end ::giggles:: Jude! stop smoking! it's bad for you ::lectures on about the rat poisen in cigarettes:: ::whacks Jude with a plastic cup:: More! ::bounces::
-Sinhe

I love it! Please continue, this sounds like a great story! Thanx! ciao.