aw, poor Moley! i like ^-^

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!1 that poor lil mole. I HOPE ITS OK! PLEASE BE OK! IM INSANE
*runs around the room with a knife and runs into a wall and dies* *is now a ghoest* IM DEAD MAHAHAHAHAHAH FEAR ME

*cracks up* I land on my speen? Oh that is friggin priceless! Nice job. Heh! That was funny!!

I like this a lot. Rhyming fits this type of poem, and this light-hearted subject, in my opinion.

^_^; The word spleen made me laugh.

lol! really really good! me? i ca't rymhe for toffee! So well done!!!

Ha-that was cute QFB-the poor mole, though!! I like it-it was a well-written poem. lol. Keep Up the good work, Gumshoe!! jkjk(that's from Carmen Sandiego if you forgot). lol bye, and happy writin' to y'all.

Hi hannah, it's kat from writers club last year... cute poem, thats pretty funny too... I agree with the lil summary...

(am-uh-reece) ammarice

umm.... funny

lol pretty funny! poor mole though

This is funny!!!! I know where you live too. BAHAHAHA

Just to let everyone know i was really really really HYPER when i wrote this, I'm usually nicer to small furry cute huggable creatures. That reminds me, am I the only one who thinks that they should have chinchilla fights in the olympics? They could wear little sumo thingys and go at each other... any way, just thought y'all like to know.

That's very cute....but kinda sad too...poor little moles....this is well written, I like it