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| Sorrowful Sparrow 2002-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseSuch mystery behind the words. Bridget hmm she isn't very nice. But beautyfully done. Enthralling I even winced when the poor Aislynn was suffering. And yet the air of mystery about what she might be suffering from mentally. I can't wait for the next part to this. The characters violent and miserable in their own ways. Brougth to life by mere words of what the author thinks and feels. Breathtaking peice. Which brings me to the doctor, with her how she has to remind herself that there is always a thin line between reality and her patient's mental projections. I love it, simply and utterly a piece of perfection. Morbid and dark, perfectly brought together. ^.^ Keep writting my dear friend. You have a talent like no other. |
| Veronique 2002-05-17 ch 1, | abuseBabe~ This is soooooo awesome. You have to write more! Hurry up so I can read the rest. I'm just sitting here waiting for it. j/k, i know you have a lot to do right now. just do what you can. Love ya babe. Veronique |
| Rollins 2002-05-03 ch 1, | abuseBleh! The only problem is that there's more to be read and I can't read it ;) Descriptive violence scene did merit that R rating, but otherwise, the story itself is well-written. I especially like the "Boy" character, extremely knowledgable and aware of itself. Hopefully we'll be able to see the symptoms that Aislynn suffers from. Good work! |
| Lulu 2002-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery...interesting..you had great description and the whole concept was fascinating. Well done. |
| Annya Kittara Surintiae 2002-05-03 ch 1, | abuseNeat story, I like the title. I like the plot so far, and I am hoping that you will post some more soon. Thanks for putting it here so people can enjoy it! |